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a poem inspired by a scared heart
this is not only a poem but a story bare with me its been quite sometime since i wrighted one of these
here we are at the start of another day that i thought would be the same as yesterday, but when the sun fell and i saw that girl, my heart skipped a few beats my lags swayed from side to side when i saw the person passed from me...,
even doe i was nine and used to cry all the time, but when the day end, all i could think about was will i ever see her again..., the sun comes up i could not sleep a few days later we meet but only this time i'm with a friend hes says come with me,
to my surprise its her i see when i seen her i dident no what to say, so i said hello whats your name she told me hi my name is tiffany, as she wisp'ers in my ear she told me don't worry i know you're name p.s im a gypsy two,
when i heard that i was in a dase, we sitted on the floor and chat no matter what we talked about we had a blast, now a few years pass and now im a young teen, we still kept in contact even doe my both are familys forbid us from see one another we with both took the beats marks and all, we where closes could be...
then one day i lay my heart on the line i said tiffaney are you going out with some guy, she said no why you ask?, i told her you know i care for you alot right, she knew what i was gonna say but i beated her to it,
i said at least think about it tiff she with a smile of course i will, as i leave and ride my skatebord to my house i'm a nervous brake down...
i keep saying in my head im sooo stubid stubid stubid, 2 weeks past without a word said then i decide to go my familys friends house down the street i ride my bord under my feet, when i get dare i see her mom and dad i told my friends please distract them,
he said sure no problem how long you want me to distract them for? i told him without a thought all i need is 30mins notting more,
i go in to the back and to my surprise.... i see tiffany on the floor with a wired look in her eyes i said whats roung are you ok?, she said yeah im ok,
a long silence fills the dare, then it brakes. when i say so... have you thought about.. you know... us? she said yeah, i said what was you're choice?... she stops and turns and says no......, my heart shattered like a glass wine cup hitting the floor,
i turn around and say ok have it you're way... walking away with tears in my eyes(pic not mine) [img][http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m5cnxykeK81rsp120o1_500.jpg[/img]
i run out door trying no let ppl see me cry i get on my bord and head home with some much history why did she say no......
still crying and talking at the same time i felt like it was a final good bye i feel in to a deep hold of worthlessness stealing selling pushing drugs painting the streets turned goth and notting could take away the pain then years past now (17) i never talked to her since what happened in that room she says thru a pm sup sonny how you doing?, i reply simply hi...,
she ask how you been, i told her o.k until you said no that day.....
she reply this is something that can't be spelled in a text heres my cell (???-???-???? i call her up and i say hello is tiffany dare? she said hi stubid its me!, i said ahhhh you're voiced changed so much?, she said you'res to, a couple hours pass...
then i build up the guts to ask why you said no to me back then?, she stops.... its.. not.. like.. i dident picture us going out....and i enjoy what i saw,
i replyed why then you said no to me all does years ago, she said i meant to say yes but by mistake i said no... i hope i dident brake you're heart or notting?,
i said yes.... then both our phones died then i was left a qustion simply... why.............
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(17 Comments) Latest comment was 5 years ago
sonnybuck217 View Profile
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5 years ago
took me quite sometime to finish this poem 3 hours to bee exsact please comment and tell me you're feelings about what you just read
CurbsidePharmacist View Profile
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5 years ago
It took me 3 hours to read it because i lost my place 4 times.
Anthony817 View Profile
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5 years ago
Wall of text... about all I got from it.
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5 years ago
Holy shit, I was going to write a snarky comment but that is a wall of text I cannot penetrate.
Anonymous 5 years ago
http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m5cnx ... o1_500.jpg Here's the link for the picture. And yes, that is quite some "wall of text" you have there.
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5 years ago
lol sorry about that
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5 years ago
^^ wery well...as i'm DEVOID of positive emotion, i'll stick to logical but constructive criticism about the layout of the text...it's a WALL of death, please break it up into sentaces like so...
here we are at the start of another day that i thought would be the same as yesterday, but when the sun fell and i saw that girl, my heart skipped a few beats my lags swayed from side to side when i saw the person passed from me...,
even doe i was nine and used to cry all the time, but when the day end, all i could think about was will i ever see her again..., the sun comes up i could not sleep a few days later we meet but only this time i'm with a friend hes says come with me,
to my surprise its her i see when i seen her i dident no what to say, so i said hello whats your name she told me hi my name is tiffany, as she wisp'ers in my ear she told me don't worry i know you're name p.s im a gypsy two,
when i heard that i was in a dase, we sitted on the floor and chat no matter what we talked about we had a blast, now a few years pass and now im a young teen, we still kept in contact even doe my both are familys forbid us from see one another we with both took the beats marks and all, we where closes could be...
then one day i lay my heart on the line i said tiffaney are you going out with some guy, she said no why you ask?, i told her you know i care for you alot right, she knew what i was gonna say but i beated her to it,
i said at least think about it tiff she with a smile of course i will, as i leave and ride my skatebord to my house i'm a nervous brake down...
i keep saying in my head im sooo stubid stubid stubid, 2 weeks past without a word said then i decide to go my familys friends house down the street i ride my bord under my feet, when i get dare i see her mom and dad i told my friends please distract them,
he said sure no problem how long you want me to distract them for? i told him without a thought all i need is 30mins notting more,
i go in to the back and to my surprise.... i see tiffany on the floor with a wired look in her eyes i said whats roung are you ok?, she said yeah im ok,
a long silence fills the dare, then it brakes. when i say so... have you thought about.. you know... us? she said yeah, i said what was you're choice?... she stops and turns and says no......, my heart shattered like a glass wine cup hitting the floor,
i turn around and say ok have it you're way... walking away with tears in my eyes(pic not mine) [img][http://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m5cnxykeK81rsp120o1_500.jpg[/img]
i run out door trying no let ppl see me cry i get on my bord and head home with some much history why did she say no......
still crying and talking at the same time i felt like it was a final good bye i feel in to a deep hold of worthlessness stealing selling pushing drugs painting the streets turned goth and notting could take away the pain then years past now (17) i never talked to her since what happened in that room she says thru a pm sup sonny how you doing?, i reply simply hi...,
she ask how you been, i told her o.k until you said no that day.....
she reply this is something that can't be spelled in a text heres my cell (???-???-???? i call her up and i say hello is tiffany dare? she said hi stubid its me!, i said ahhhh you're voiced changed so much?, she said you'res to, a couple hours pass...
then i build up the guts to ask why you said no to me back then?, she stops.... its.. not.. like.. i dident picture us going out....and i enjoy what i saw,
i replyed why then you said no to me all does years ago, she said i meant to say yes but by mistake i said no... i hope i dident brake you're heart or notting?,
i said yes.... then both our phones died then i was left a qustion simply... why.............
...a little better...i was able to read it without getting BRAIN cancer...
no bad...!:spliff:
sonnybuck217 View Profile
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5 years ago
can someone from the admin list add me or someting so i can fix it to be read able
DCDannyDoom23 View Profile
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5 years ago
yeah....i cant fix this lol good stuff though, man.
sonnybuck217 View Profile
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5 years ago
thank you for trying dc dan
sonnybuck217 View Profile
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5 years ago
well i guess i got to live with it like that ohh well i guess i'll take a note from this (note make sure to hit the enter bar once in awhile) lol
Anthony817 View Profile
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5 years ago
I added a1200's broken up version so its easier on the eyes.
sonnybuck217 View Profile
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5 years ago
thanks guys AGAIN I AM SOOOO sorry about the text wall of doom
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5 years ago
Here we are at the start of another day, that I thought would be the same as yesterday;

When the sun fell, I saw that girl.

My heart skipped a few beats, my legs swayed from side to side, when I saw the person pass in front of me;

When I was nine, I used to cry all the time, but when the day end, all I could think about was will I ever see her again?

The sun comes up, I could not sleep, a few days later we meet.

Only this time I'm with a friend who says, "come with me." To my surprise it's her I see.

When I saw her I didn't know what to say, so I said, "Hello, what's your name." She told me, "Hi, my name is Tiffany."

As she whispered in my ear she told me, "Don't worry, I know your name and I'm a gypsy too."

When I heard that I was in a daze, we sat on the floor and had a chat. No matter what we talked about we had a blast;

Now a few years pass and I'm a young teen, we still kept in contact even though both are families forbid us from seeing;

We both took the beatings, marks and all, but we were as close as could be...

Then one day, I lay my heart on the line. I said, "Tiffany, are you going out with some guy?"

She said, "No, why do you ask?"

I told her, "You know I care for you a lot right." She knew what I was gonna say, but I beat her to it.

I said, "at least think about it, Tiff." She with a smile, "Of course I will." As I leave and ride my skateboard to my house, I'm a nervous brake down...

I keep saying in my head I'm sooo stupid, stupid, stupid.

Two weeks pass without a word said, then I decide to go my family's friend's house down the street, I ride my board under my feet,

When I get there I see her mom and dad, I told my friends, "please distract them"...

He said, "Sure, no problem, how long you want me to distract them for?" I told him, without a thought, " All I need is 30 minutes, nothing more.

I go in through the back and to my surprise, I see Tiffany on the floor with a weird look in her eyes.

I said, "What is wrong, are you ok?" She said, "Yeah, I'm okay."

A long silence fills the air, then it brakes when I say, "So, have you thought about.. you know... us?" She said, "yeah." I said, "What was your choice?"

She stops and turns and says, "No." My heart shattered like a glass wine cup hitting the floor,

I turn around and say, "Okay, have it your way" as I was walking away with tears in my eyes.

I run out door trying not to let people see me cry, I get on my board and head home thinking, "With so much history, why did she say no?"

Still crying and talking at the same time, I felt like it was a final good bye.

I fell in to a deep hold of worthlessness: stealing, selling, pushing drugs, painting the streets; I turned Goth. Nothing could take away the pain. Many years past until now.

I never talked to her since what happened in that room, then one day she says through a PM, "Sup, Sonny, how you doing?" I reply, simply, "hi."

She asks, "How you been?" I told her, "Okay, until you said no that day."

She replied, "This is something that can't be spelled in a text here's my cell." I call her up and I say, "Hello, is Tiffany there? She said, "Hi, stupid, it's me!" I said, "Ahhhh, your voiced changed so much?, She said yours too." A couple of hours pass...

Then I build up the guts to ask "Why you said no to me back then?" She stops, ".... its.. not.. like..that.. I didn't picture us going out....and I enjoyed our time."

I replied, "Why then did you say no to me all does years ago?" She said, "I meant to say yes, but by mistake I said no... I hope i didn't break your heart though?

I said, "Yes." Then both our phones died.

Then I was left with a simple question.

Why?
Majestic_Lizard View Profile
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5 years ago
Still a lot of errors in there. But it is easier to digest.
Dimento76 View Profile
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5 years ago
Keep up the good work, sonnybuck.
I'm sure we all eagerly look forward to reading your future stories.
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5 years ago
thank you diment76 hopefully i hope i don't make a text wall of death again lol
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